Park and Eleanor (entry 3)

“I don't like you, Park," she said, sounding for a second like she actually meant it. "I..." - her voice nearly disappeared - "think I live for you."
He closed his eyes and pressed his head back into his pillow.
"I don't think I even breathe when we're not together," she whispered. "Which means, when I see you on Monday morning, it's been like sixty hours since I've taken a breath. That's probably why I'm so crabby, and why I snap at you. All I do when we're apart is think about you, and all I do when we're together is panic. Because every second feels so important. And because I'm so out of control, I can't help myself. I'm not even mine anymore, I'm yours, and what if you decide that you don't want me? How could you want me like I want you?"
He was quiet. He wanted everything she'd just said to be the last thing he heard. He wanted to fall asleep with 'I want you' in his ears.”

This quote really hooks the reader, just like a hook with a fish.  It would draw them in because it shows the strong connection between Park and Eleanor and how they are nearly inseparable. It also shows how they are overcoming their emotions struggles and differences in their relationship. A reader would be drawn to this quote because of descriptive emotional and physical detail such as, panic and disappearance. The intimate detail presented would draw in the audience as well.